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[167600] Artist: stealing | Title: tryout 2 | Time: 1h 40m
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stealing Sunday, November 11th 2012, 9:42 AM

Ailaik Sunday, November 11th 2012, 6:32 PM
I'm not sure if tryouts are still necessary, but I'll crit it anyway.

It's pretty much the same as your first tryout, no background and even less shading going on in this one.
It looks rushed and unfinished to me.
If tryouts still count, I'd like to ask you to practise a bit more first, and vote "out."

But, since this place is pretty dead lately anyway, I don't think anyone will complain if you practise here. (better wait a bit first for someone to agree with me though) As long as you put some effort in your work and not post scribbles or other unfinished stuff..

ZacharyB Sunday, November 11th 2012, 8:45 PM
I'll agree to that. Please continue to draw here.

[166649] Artist: stealing | Title: tryout1 | Time: 2h 16m
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stealing Tuesday, October 25th 2011, 8:20 AM
oh hey sro, it s been a while heh, i have a strong feeling nobody remembers me?

well, i used to be accepted when i was much younger and years later i ve come back because i missed it all heh, so i think that means i m not accepted anymore? if i m not i guess this is tryout one?

**tryout 1

(Edited on October 25, 2011, 5:40 pm)

Ailaik Tuesday, October 25th 2011, 12:14 PM
if it is, I guess there's a bit of a lack of background? :P

stealing Tuesday, October 25th 2011, 5:39 PM
ahh yeah otl
i was finished before i remembered about trying-out and all that good stuff. c':
on the next one fo sho.

sweet Sunday, October 30th 2011, 2:42 AM
hellooo xP welcome back!

your shading is really interesting but i'd wish you spent more time using different volumes. it also seems a little random.. can't really see a light source.
the stars glowing from his hands should also be a light source! There should be some highlights showing on him. IE. if you were facing a fire.. you would have some warm highlights on u!


Your anatomy seems up to standards! tho i have to point out that His left sleeve is eating his arm lol.

Overall looks pretty good! your style is pretty interesting too.. GL

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