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[163692] Artist: souldew | Title: Lost? | Time: 2h 25m
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souldew Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:00 PM
My hand is cramping up so I'll leave it at that.

First tryout. Little fairy seems shocked to be found in her woodland spot. Seems others are watching her too. DUN DUN DUUUN...

EDIT: No-one seemed to mind the ugly watermark being removed, so I did.

Owl Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:26 PM
that watermark ruins the whooole picture.

stroudle Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:29 PM
Agreed about the watermark. I think it's perfectly fine to put a little signature in the corner or do something thats relatively hidden, but your eye just goes straight to the watermark and it's nearly impossible to focus on any other part of the picture.

souldew Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:31 PM
Good point. Am I allowed to remove the watermark now or do I have to leave it?

stroudle Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:35 PM
Okay crits. This is a neat idea but it looks kind of sloppy. That scribbly style of shading is really hard to pull off unless you absolutely have it down. I think you could have pushed the values a lot more because it's night time outdoors. As it is now, it just looks like she's in a dimly lit room.

The anatomy is okay but there are a few errors. Her feet are too small and her left boob is just kind of glued to the middle of her chest and doesn't really seems to be affected by gravity.

Edit: As far as I know, you can't edit the image after it's been critiqued. Don't worry about it though. as long as you avoid it in the next tryout it won't be a problem.

(Edited on November 21, 2010, 8:36 pm)

souldew Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:41 PM
Okay. Thanks for your crits. I've started life drawing classes and I know my anatomy's not perfect but let's hope there's a learning curve...

As for cubone, umm... Is there another souldew? I don't really understand.

Lily Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:49 PM

souldew Sunday, November 21st 2010, 8:55 PM
8[ Didn't realise there was already an established artist with the name!
I wasn't trying to impersonate him/her, just thought it would make a good username... My apologies.

souldew Sunday, November 21st 2010, 9:04 PM

Lynn Sunday, November 21st 2010, 9:11 PM

emi Sunday, November 21st 2010, 9:13 PM
dude i thought you were kim for a sec she used to have a swablu av

emi Sunday, November 21st 2010, 9:14 PM
also i think we should let her remove the watermark what harm is it gonna do if she does??

Dande Sunday, November 21st 2010, 10:22 PM
i'm not too big of a fan of the arbitrary hard nipples.

jessoso Sunday, November 21st 2010, 11:09 PM
cubone shut the fuck up you aren't funny. i know you think you're hilarious right now but jesus christ. no.

jollygood Sunday, November 21st 2010, 11:40 PM
I think removing the watermark is ok tbh.

Critswise Stroudle got what I was gonna say really! Tho maybe don't use so many swirling bits like in the bend of the legs? It doesn't look quite right imo I think would look better just used for landscape? I guess it's a style thing but that's my opinion!!

Good job on creating a scene though! Reminds me of one of my tryouts years ago, I did a fairy mushroomy thing too! :D though quite different from your take on it.

Keep it up! And ignore Cubone who's being a douche for the sake of it, you've done nothing wrong.

causticbot Sunday, November 21st 2010, 11:48 PM
wth...cubone, you are seriously being an ass for particularly no reason. i think you've made it your purpose to stay here only to troll people.

stroudule covered the crits, good luck on your next tryout.

a kim Monday, November 22nd 2010, 12:17 AM
god forbid someone have the same username as someone else, im sure theres no other "cubones" on in the internet

a kim Monday, November 22nd 2010, 12:24 AM
also the person who you refferred to as being the real souldew goes by a different name now so lol just stop

Takio Lamary Monday, November 22nd 2010, 12:53 AM
I think as a first tryout this is fairly
decent, the only thing I personally
would change is the light source
and its reflections as well as
the swirls for knees. But overall it's nice.

SockRockets Monday, November 22nd 2010, 1:31 AM
her torso and legs are really short.....and her boobs are defying gravity

xSenshix Monday, November 22nd 2010, 2:11 AM
I really like the idea as it plays with imagination a bit and I'm all about that!

Critique: Her arm is too long for her body, if I'm not mistaken. And it seems like the whole picture lacks some perspective.
I'd like to see some small touches like a bit less saturation or darker colors perhaps as the scenery gets further away, but that's just my preference on a picture like this.
Since the picture is a night setting, I would've loved to have you seen you play with blue and purple hues in the shading.
Again, this is still a lovely picture and I love the wings.
Can't wait to see the next tryout C:

SockRockets Monday, November 22nd 2010, 2:23 AM
actually her arms are fine they just look long because the rest of her body is so short.

xSenshix Monday, November 22nd 2010, 3:19 AM
^ Alright, then.

Takio Lamary Monday, November 22nd 2010, 5:14 AM
Cubone, I believe we've fully established
that the hilarity level you currently emit
is in the negative range, If I were you
I would decease immediately.

Darkraii Monday, November 22nd 2010, 5:53 AM
cubone they're not mad just pls lev kthx

SockRockets Monday, November 22nd 2010, 3:08 PM
@senshi what i meant was, her arms are proportionate to the size of her head, but her body is way too short

Night Monday, November 22nd 2010, 7:46 PM
oh god cubone you are painfully unfunny

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