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[166155] Artist: peon | Title: Tryout #1 | Time: 5h 14m
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peon Tuesday, July 26th 2011, 7:09 AM
i was not sure if you NEEDED a character in an image, but i can make my next tryout mainly a character if i have to, right??? @n@;

haha anyways this took me forever!! i hope it is okay but please do crit as hard as possible c:

stroudle Tuesday, July 26th 2011, 8:28 AM
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I think you can do tryouts without a character, if that's what you're mainly going to be drawing. The way I see it is, whatever you draw, really try and put you're all in it.

This is nice, and I like the way you did the grass. Everything feels relaxed and cool. I do wish you had done more to make it pop.

Right now there's not a lot of contrast. You should work on pushing values as is really gives pictures more depth. I feel like a lot more detail could have been added here to make the composition more interesting as well. Right now, we don't have a lot to look at. Maybe some more detail to the castle would have been nice, or add a bit more to the caravan.

Right now it's just kind of placed there, but we don't really know why so it's just kind of like...oh well...there's that. This picture doesn't really tell much of a story imho. It just lets you know that it's a part of one...if that makes any sense.

Anywho I went on a very long incoherent rant because I'm tired. You have wonderful colors and I see from your DA that you have some potential. Just focus on creating more interest in your second tryout and you'll do fine!

peon Tuesday, July 26th 2011, 9:09 AM
thank you so much! :D


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