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[163880] Artist: johnisnotanarsonist | Title: tryout1 | Time: 30m 38s
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johnisnotanarsonist Sunday, December 5th 2010, 12:01 AM
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My first tryout
I'm a bit of a a BIG Beatles fan, as i guess you can see. smiley
The picture is kind of airbrushy because of the light the window is letting in...that paul is looking out of. smiley
and that line that is coming out of George's nonexistant mouth is a lollipop stick, not a cigarette.

fgsfdsdasdfffffff Sunday, December 5th 2010, 12:30 AM
you're not gonna like what im gonna tell you the beatles freaking suxx that's just how it is kid

nuclaic Sunday, December 5th 2010, 12:58 AM
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flrrrgh i love the beatles.
but
uhm the picture is too simple/small. not full body as the rules stated tryouts should be.
the head on george looks like he has no neck. or its super thin. then im guessing the one closes to camera is lenny cause of that starking nose. but his middle finger is too thin, and appears to be shorter than the index. theres some bleeds in the color.
and thats all the crits from me

rhaz_crossbones Sunday, December 5th 2010, 1:16 AM
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it honestly looks like a doodle and not even a tryout XD

^agree with nuclaic. You should probably go back and read the rules, so when you do your next tryout, you have a better idea of what would be looked for

johnisnotanarsonist Sunday, December 5th 2010, 1:19 AM
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Oops, I missed the fullbody thing when i was reading the tryout guidelines xP
Thanks for the crits! <3

johnisnotanarsonist Sunday, December 5th 2010, 1:19 AM
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alright, I'll do that.

Lynn Sunday, December 5th 2010, 2:22 AM
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Also you shouldnt have to describe what's going on in the pic? why include the lollipop at all if it can easily be confused for a number of things.. toothpick, cig, curly moustache from a weird angle?
but yea! just another tip :D
im a loser and like the same beatles songs everyone else does. the usual. haha..

drrr!! Sunday, December 5th 2010, 8:02 AM
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haha this sorta reminds me of those john lennon sketches ya pretty cool stuff

stroudle Sunday, December 5th 2010, 9:04 PM
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I don't believe anyone "misses" the rules. It's only the second rule of tryouts, there's really no way to miss it. Sorry if I sound short, but it's a pet peeve.

The rules also state that this should be to the best of your abilities and I don't think you'll have much luck here if this really is your best.

It looks like you have a lot of potential, but this is an obvious doodle. The lines are sloppy, there are color bleeds everywhere and the anatomy is off in many places.

Bitchy rant over, I hope you blow us away with the next one.


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