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[166211] Artist: dubbletapp | Title: tryout 1 | Time: 8h 29m
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dubbletapp Wednesday, August 3rd 2011, 11:37 AM
Hi guys I'm Tara. I was a member here a long time ago but I literally haven't oekaki'd in years... Re-familiarizing with the tools is definitely testing of my patience smiley

I know I need a lot of work, so crits pleaze <3

(Edited on August 3, 2011, 11:46 am)

terujoan Wednesday, August 3rd 2011, 2:04 PM
Heya! Welcome back! This is a cool picture and your style is really interesting. When you do your next tryout remember that it has to be full bodied. One of my main crits is that the figure is much brighter compared to the background. You don't seem to have indicated a source of light which would only highlight her rather than illuminating the whole scene. I also make this mistake a lot and it is quite hard to remember to do it. I don't know if this is just your style but to me her arms, especially her wrists seem to have strange anatomy. Her hands seem to be disjointed from her arms because of the angle of the wrists. As I said, this might just be your style and if it is ignore the arm bit! However I think the angle her left leg is at is wrong. It looks like her knee is too high up. I don't know if you meant to do that but her leg looks like it is bending. I really like the way you've shaded the metal. It is very cool! Hope this helps a bit and good luck on your next tryout!

sweet Thursday, August 4th 2011, 7:00 PM
wb tara :D oh man. i love this. ;A; the way you draw faces is really unique! for anatomy, the ribcage looks REALLY long, and not much separation. Here's a skeletonnnnn;

her breasts don't look very natural, like she stuffed her shirt or their just fake lol. There should be some fat coming up her chest somewhat,
http://www.buystoreshelving.com/female_display_forms/curvy_female_full_round_torso.jpg (not real but gets the point across lol.)

look forward to your second!

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