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[163920] Artist: cyanescens | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 35m
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cyanescens Tuesday, December 7th 2010, 2:11 PM
tryout 2?

stroudle Tuesday, December 7th 2010, 6:05 PM
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This is pretty, but it seems really weak compared to your first tryout. The background is really simple and it looks like you just didn't feel like bothering with the feet or hands.

The colors are nice, but it would have been good to see you push the values a little more. As it is, everything looks just...sloppy and kind of unrefined.

But I think you've got the basics down.

In.

emi Tuesday, December 7th 2010, 6:43 PM
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in defo i like your style

Takio Lamary Tuesday, December 7th 2010, 10:37 PM
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In, you're definitely intermediate.

cheeto Wednesday, December 8th 2010, 2:13 AM
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in

fantomu Wednesday, December 8th 2010, 6:36 AM
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innn

sheepsgobaaa Thursday, December 9th 2010, 2:27 AM
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The only thing that catches my eyes right away is the over wrinkled sleeves (But idk if that's a style of a shirt or not OTL) and that her right ankle seems to be the same thickness as the legs?
Nonetheless, the style you have is cute. (I also like that hair) In from me! o v <


[163598] Artist: cyanescens | Title: tryout 1 | Time: 9h 44m
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cyanescens Tuesday, November 16th 2010, 7:38 PM
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Zero~ Tuesday, November 16th 2010, 10:58 PM
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daww this is so cute

the only things that look wrong to me are the table and the girl. the table's at an awkward angle and the girl's head looks too big for her body. or her legs are just real shorrttt.

but anyway i think this is super adorable

(Edited on November 16, 2010, 11:00 pm)

Missy Tuesday, November 16th 2010, 11:38 PM
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I think this looks lovely!
to me I think the most stand out problem is the girl's anatomy, particularly her legs and torso.
It seems that either her torso is a bit too short, or that her legs attach at a spot that's higher than it should be.
It's a very sweet picture and I like your lines!


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