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[167399] Artist: bird | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 44m
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bird Monday, August 6th 2012, 8:22 AM
tryout two

resisting urges to go back and get it later
like the milk wouldn't sour itself in the refrigerator

Worm Wednesday, August 8th 2012, 5:16 PM
I'd say third.

I like your tryouts very much but neither of them shows a backround that isn't just a design -- which like someone said on your previous submission works with the picture but I'd like to see a less abstract backround as well.

Also, the anatomy here is very good but tryouts are supposed to be full-body c:

[166967] Artist: bird | Title: this did not take three hours | Time: 3h 46m
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bird Tuesday, January 17th 2012, 6:40 AM
So hi this is my first tryout

colors are fun

KESS Tuesday, January 17th 2012, 11:55 AM
I love your usage of color, and your shading is intriguing. There are some minor anatomy issues, but overall very well done. The composition could use a little bit of work, and although the background does work with this particular piece, i would like to see something with more depth- make the subject interact with it. Very nice work! I look forward to your next tryout! good luck!

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