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[164622] Artist: Yeyo | Title: tryout #1 | Time: 2h 8m
Pic #88141

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Yeyo Monday, March 7th 2011, 1:18 AM
bathtub devil.

kremmel Monday, March 7th 2011, 2:22 AM
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i really love it, i don't have any crits really, but it doesn't look like she is holding that ball. i really love your style, can't wait til you get in. ;P

antigone Monday, March 7th 2011, 2:47 AM
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Oouu, I like this. Especially how you drew her eyebrows and the massive rubber duck.

Ree. Monday, March 7th 2011, 2:52 PM
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such a strange and interesting concept i commend you
i like this so much!! i want you in right now

t-rexcellent Monday, March 7th 2011, 4:49 PM
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there are some anatomy problems with how the legs and torso are connecting to each other, and i agree it doesn't really look lik she's holding that beach ball

also the background looks unfinished, sloppy, and rushed as compared to the girl in the foreground. while she's unpolished (which i actually quite like the look of) the background is leaps and bounds more sloppy.

RakuHund Monday, March 7th 2011, 8:18 PM
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just needs more polish I guess
but I like it c:

Yeyo Monday, March 7th 2011, 9:07 PM
Thanks for the comments & crits. Truthfully, this wasn't the best planned piece, I also hate the background lol.
So I should draw another tryout sometime soon?

antigone Monday, March 7th 2011, 9:13 PM
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Ya, you get two tryouts.

Yeyo Monday, March 7th 2011, 11:37 PM
oh, I thought so! Thank you.
I think I'll use chibi-paint on the next one, I like that a lot better.


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