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[164130] Artist: Vemreals | Title: Tryout 1 ~ Slaermev and Avery | Time: 1h 1m
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Vemreals Saturday, January 8th 2011, 3:08 AM
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Ugh. I chose a really bad time to try out.

Basically, this is just a slightly abstract drawing I made of two characters of mine. Got lazy on the shading; visible, but hard to see.

I realize that now the intermediate and advanced oekakis have merged together, not even this thing that I've worked on for an hour will get above borderline. But hey, doesn't hurt to try ;3 Tell me what you think!

Takio Lamary Saturday, January 8th 2011, 3:30 AM
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Well, "got lazy on the shading"
isn't a very great thing to say
if you're trying to impress other
artists in hopes that you may be
accepted. Nevertheless, I'll withhold
my decision till after your second
tryout.

Not to be too persnickety, but what
we would very much enjoy seeing is
your actual potential skills. I believe
that you put a good amount of effort
in accordance to your desire to join here.
That being said, I still, and I hope you can
agree with me, think that a bit more due
diligence is required when showcasing the
absolute greatness of your abilities.
I simply feel that this fails to establish that.

Gyarados Saturday, January 8th 2011, 6:37 AM
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"Got lazy on the shading"
big mistake, lame excuse. don't even expect to get in when you're not even putting in full effort.

"not even this thing that I've worked on for an hour will get above borderline" if so, practice more and improve!

Vemreals Saturday, January 8th 2011, 5:05 PM
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Ah, I've been told not to use excuses before. XD Sorry about that, I'm usualy more confident o.o

Well, perhaps in the second tryout, I'll put great effort in my anatomy ;3


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