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[167311] Artist: Tansy | Title: hey | Time: 1h 45m
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Tansy Sunday, July 1st 2012, 10:36 PM

itsbecca! Monday, July 2nd 2012, 2:39 PM
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pokeymans! i enjoy the fire

KESS Monday, July 2nd 2012, 7:26 PM
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omg i love this!


[167159] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout two | Time: 8h 36m
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Tansy Friday, June 22nd 2012, 12:27 AM
this took a while! it's a slight remake of a picture i made ages ago, i don't know whether i'm entirely satisfied but i'm pretty happy :)

some feedback/critique would be lovely!! thank you!!!

http://sroekaki.net/oekaki/pictures/90410.jpg <--(one)

Worm Friday, June 22nd 2012, 4:59 PM
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I really really like this :) My only critiques would be I would have liked to see more interaction with her and the backround, and then the mouth, ear, and nose as well -- they're just kind of floating in space and its really hard to tell where they are in relation to where she is. They kind of all look like they're intended to be far away and yet somehow really close because they aren't casting any shadows. And the last bit of this critique, shading using colors used elsewhere is always good and makes it feel like the character is part of the picture rather than something pasted on after -- the colors shes shaded with are kind of subtle and pale compared with the harsher shading on water / sand and the flamingo. I would have used stronger yellows and possibly pinks to shade her -- the sky implies this is taking place at sunset but her actual shading gives me the feeling of daybreak on slightly cloudy day.

I still really like this though, surreal art is always very fun :)

I would say you're in.

Tansy Wednesday, June 27th 2012, 9:46 PM
thank you so much for your critique!!! i was honestly looking at this when i finished, thinking "okay this doesn't look right" and i can completely see how it would be a more coherent piece :)
sooo can i draw here or do i wait? i can see it's not especially busy at the moment!

Worm Thursday, June 28th 2012, 4:29 AM
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Traditionally you're supposed to wait until further reviews / critiques / votes but seeing as no one is voting *I'D* say its fine but my word is not law x3


[166891] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout one | Time: 11h 18m
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Tansy Sunday, February 26th 2012, 12:50 AM
hey :)

i did a first tryout here yonks ago but that got bumped off the board so i made another, i plan to do another pretty soon though.
critique would be fabulous if anyone has time to do some!

Ailaik Sunday, February 26th 2012, 1:02 AM
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First things first: I absolutely love how oily your colours look.
Although, your anatomy seems a bit wonky, and there could be a lot more depth in this if you defined your shading some more, especially in the grass/rock surfaces..
But overall I really like your style, and am looking forward to your next tryout.
Good luck :)

Zero~ Sunday, March 4th 2012, 1:17 AM
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wowow those cloudsss

Mara Monday, March 12th 2012, 4:57 AM
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You really did a great job on the sky and such :3 and I love the feel the colors have
For the anatomy:
http://i40.tinypic.com/ip6vkl.png
Person on our left
The angle of the chin is off for the direction of the face. His hand nearest his friend has odd finger lengths, the pointer finger is a bit too long and the pinky and ring fingers are both too short
His legs look too short compared to his torso

The person on the right:
Her torso is too long, and her leg furthest from us seems to disappear? It doesn't look like it's folded under. Her legs seem a bit short also, and her face is a little big large
For the shading, the main thing is that I think that there should be a shadow cast on her, and it could use a little more depth
Besides that I'm also looking forward to what you come up with next :D


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