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Hey c: This is my first tryout. I really enoyed drawing it, especially all those pebbles xD
(I'm sorry about my simple English. I can understand you perfectly but I'm not really used to talk)
Well, crits are appreciated c: (and mayybe some redlines on her shading? I did it quite light because I wasn't sure about it..)
@teru: Thanks and good luck to you, too c:
@imbreum: Thank you for the critique! Um, the forehead was supposed to be covered by her hair a little.. seems like I should have drawn the hair a little more detailled at that part, it's difficult to see >.<
And I want to sit in a pool like that, too, that's why I drew it xD
I really really like this a lot. My main crit is that the shading is too light, like you said. Her environment is very dark and she doesn't really have any shading on her. Maybe you could have made the cavern/oasis sort of place she's in a little luminescent? And she could have some light bouncing off of her and some intense shadowing and it would be wicked cool? Idk, this is really really pretty, and I love the colors you used and I'm really jealous of her. I wanna be naked in a secluded pool of wonderful. I especially love the leaves with the blue flowers in the background, those are great. My one other crit is that her forehead seems really small. But other than that, this is a wonderful tryout and I really can't wait to see your second one. Much luck!
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