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[166803] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: No Title | Time: 9m 27s
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Prince Abooboo Wednesday, November 30th 2011, 1:55 AM
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Sorry about how terrible this is ):
I've never really redlined anything before, but I think that's what the arm should look like, although you could angle it down more to go more along with were you intended for her to be pointing.

The arm was just a little long is all.

(Original by snore_police)

snore_police Wednesday, November 30th 2011, 9:45 AM
No, this is great! Thanks for your help I like that it gives the figure below her arm a little more room (because I need to more her a little more).


[166799] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: UHHH | Time: 24m 48s
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Prince Abooboo Tuesday, November 29th 2011, 6:28 AM
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So I meant to do this on ShiPainter, and I didn't realize what was happening until I was going to change layers. SO THIS IS WHAT YOU GET. Sorry for the not so great quality ):

Seijimon Tuesday, November 29th 2011, 9:26 AM
im kinda glad you made that mistake! I dig the tones in this and the pose in general! that little bit of spine curvature is SEXY xD


[166787] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: No Title | Time: 35m 1s
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Prince Abooboo Saturday, November 26th 2011, 8:29 AM
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I might work on this again later, bu I don't like it right now.


[166752] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: Kool-Aid | Time: 33m 32s
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Prince Abooboo Saturday, November 19th 2011, 6:22 AM
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UHHH.


[166726] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: Homosex | Time: 7h 24m
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Prince Abooboo Saturday, November 19th 2011, 5:03 AM
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This was originally supposed to be a lady and a man but I suck at drawing girls. It ended up being two of my other characters. I also cannot color this. I doooon't know why.

Uhhh, and thank you for accepting me :) I appreciate it!

Crits appreciated! Woooo!

nuclaic Sunday, November 20th 2011, 4:54 AM
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im no good with anatomy so I will just say they look really cute together all kissy

imbreum Monday, November 21st 2011, 1:08 AM
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one is just an unfortunately flat chested woman

i'd like to see this colored in really awesome warm tones


[166720] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 4h 59m
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Prince Abooboo Friday, November 11th 2011, 10:38 AM
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This is my second tryout. UHH. It's Spock and Kirk. Redlines/crits appreciated (:

I await your decision!

Even though it's on the same page as this:
Tryout 1 >> http://sroekaki.net/oekaki/pictures/90234.png

emi Friday, November 11th 2011, 7:06 PM
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hmmm out

the shading is placed well but you could have pushed the values much further. the background just sorta finishes, you could have added some other mountains/rocks or whatever in the far background the give it some depth. the background also looks rushed and the lines in the shading don't fit with the subjects or give it anything extra so you really didn't need them.

another thing you could work on is the characters interacting with the background more instead of just being there.

t-rexcellent Friday, November 11th 2011, 7:18 PM
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in i think you are intermediate. i agree that you could have pushed the values in the shading, but i think the image is good overall. i enjoy the simple background and i don't think that it needs anything more. maybe a bit of line tapering like you have done on the characters, but otherwise i think it looks really nice.

imbreum Saturday, November 12th 2011, 5:27 AM
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i think in. your knowledge of anatomy seems intermediate at the very least, and i enjoy your tones and style. their noses make me happy. while i agree that you could have pushed the values, i didn't look at this picture and immediately cross my arms and think, "SOMETHING IS MISSING." though i did think that kirk's arms were a little short. maybe spock's are too(?), but they don't bother me. i like this. i think it's cute and good, just like your other one, and i say in and good luck!!

Prince Abooboo Saturday, November 12th 2011, 12:10 PM
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Thank you all very much for the comments (whether you said in or out, they were helpful)

@imbreum I see the shortness of arms. I didn't notice before! Looking at it now, Spock's arms seem shorter than Kirk's in comparison to their bodies. Now it's all I can see. I love how in some situations, ignorance really is bliss :00

@emi Hmmm. I see your point. Or points. This is more of a question for everyone, but what exactly do you mean by "push the values". Do you mean use harsher or darker tones or do you mean using an accenting color?

Ailaik Saturday, November 12th 2011, 2:17 PM
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Funny that you drew Spock as your second tryout, since he's been singing about your first..
Anyway, I say in :)
I like the pastel colors, and indeed the lines in the shading weren't really necessary, but they don't really bother me either.
Your style is cool, and I think you'd fit right in here..
Good luck!

t-rexcellent Saturday, November 12th 2011, 5:15 PM
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i love spock's mouth

t-rexcellent Saturday, November 12th 2011, 5:16 PM
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not like in a creepy stalker way. i just like how you drew it.

Prince Abooboo Sunday, November 13th 2011, 8:33 AM
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I think you follow Spock's mouth around and take pictures of it from behind dumpsters and stuff.


[166715] Artist: Prince Abooboo | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 5h 7m
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Prince Abooboo Thursday, November 10th 2011, 8:51 AM
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SOOO UHHH.

Hi. I haven't drawn here in a really long time, and I really wanted to do Oekaki and draw Bilbo Baggins so this is a tryout. I know a couple things anatomy-wise are off and his feet aren't quite big enough for Hobbit feet, but I really like how this turned out.


Please redline and critique!

Ailaik Thursday, November 10th 2011, 3:22 PM
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I'm loving the colors, and character/tree design.. personally I'm just not too fond of the scribbly bits. sketchyness can be cool, but here it kinda looks messy and rushed..
But apart from that, kudos on the interesting lighting, and full body/background.. I'd really like to see what you can come up with in your second tryout.

t-rexcellent Thursday, November 10th 2011, 8:16 PM
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BIIIIILBOOOOO BILBO BAGGINS

t-rexcellent Thursday, November 10th 2011, 8:16 PM
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also i really like the folds in the pants god damn

Prince Abooboo Thursday, November 10th 2011, 11:24 PM
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The pants are my favorite part. And his face.

Prince Abooboo Friday, November 11th 2011, 12:25 AM
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@Ailaik I see what you mean. And I probably was rushing. I don't really remember... Aha. And thank you btw (:

Laq Friday, November 11th 2011, 1:06 AM
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beautiful baggins

imbreum Friday, November 11th 2011, 7:06 AM
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i agree with ailaik about the scribbly bits
but i love most everything about this tryout
even though i'm not very familiar with lord of the rings
i watched the animated version of the hobbit when i was a wee ladee

all i crit is that the leg that is propped up has the weirdest position i ever seen. which in turn makes the arm that is leaning against it seem awkward. i love the colors and the trees and the sky and the pants. good luck!

Prince Abooboo Friday, November 11th 2011, 7:29 AM
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Yes yes! I see it. Aahah, I think it's the foot that makes the leg look weird. It's like a chain reaction!

Prince Abooboo Friday, November 11th 2011, 7:30 AM
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Oh! And thank you (:


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