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[47925] Artist: Pencil Hands | Title: Nervous Nidorans | Time: 39h 8m
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Pencil Hands Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:15 PM
Timer lies like CRAZY. You can take off 1420 minutes.

Yay! This is my first tryout picture. The reason the timer lies so much is because I didn't want to use a safety save on it, so I just kept it open when I slept and have been working on this for 3 days straight. My hand hurts, thank god I have a tablet.

Anyway, It's a Nidoran male and female, the guy one is gonna ask her out but he's real nervous; awww, how cute.

I hope you all like it! :)

Pins Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:19 PM
oh wow oh wow oh wow.
that shading is -gorgeous-
good luck getting in. I dont think you will have a problem.

Kia Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:20 PM
That is really cute. <3 The coloring and detali is awesome! I like how you humanized them.

Oops! I didn't see that this was a tryout. xD In that case, I have a few crits. There's some anatomy mistakes on the girl, like her torso is very thin, but her breasts are rather large, and I get a little confused around the guys midsection. His elbow and shirt look like they're overlapping backwards to me.
I really like this, and I think you have a great chance of getting in! Good luck!

(Edited on August 20, 2006, 7:25 pm)

Wolfdoodler Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:20 PM

I do believe that you will have a good chance of getting in.

Becca Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:25 PM


Sure, there are some anatomy flaws..
The colouring.
The lineart.
The shading.
The background.

Equal love?

Just my opinion though?

Here's a redline of the girl x];;


I hope..
it helps? XD

(Edited on August 20, 2006, 7:35 pm)

spottedcow Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:29 PM
i seeeee a good amount of anatomy errors but then again i can't draw people for crap. and the way the background is slanted.. the locker numbers would be tooo

arsaniit-wolf Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:33 PM
:o...the shading..lineart...BG!!!! everythings like...perfect! You'll definetly get in. xD.

oh yeah..this is a tryout...um...yes, anatomy errors have already been said. And I'm horrid at humans so ignore this part...xD

(Edited on August 20, 2006, 7:36 pm)

Pencil Hands Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:37 PM
Yeah, I know there are anatomy problems (especially with the girl, I sort of rushes her lower half, because when I was drawing it, it was getting late). >.< I don't think they appear so much that it really disturbs the picture however. Oh well; keep the crits coming! (And the redline did help!)

Oh, oops, forgot to tilt the locker numbers... oh well... Thank you for telling me though!
(I honestly don't like the background too much because I think it doesn't go as well with the Nidorans, but I'm not as good with backgrounds as I am with people/the subjects. I'll work on it however and try to improve. =) )

Captain Muffin Mycophage Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:39 PM
Beatiful shading style ^^ It's nice, but to me not quite archive worthy.

Their anatomy has some flaws, first, why on earth is he so hunched over, and his arms are a little big for his body. (is it just me, or does it look like hes grabbing his pants oo;)

The girl is mostly okay, (I love her expression) the legs don't really follow her pose. Good luck!

Becca Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:44 PM
Muffin, I believe he is nervous.
As he is about to ask the girl on a date :)

I do that alot when I am nervous :)

Redmoon Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:48 PM
Welcome to SRON <33333

This is lovely, those hands, wow I'd kill to be able to draw hands like that -weirs- your style is wicked awsome and again Welcome I know you'll get in. <3

Kia Sunday, August 20th 2006, 7:55 PM
Here's a redline from me. Sorry photobucket shrunk it. xP


Pencil Hands Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:13 PM
(Trying not to sound rude here. >.< )
The wrist thing is my style, I prefer to draw "cutesier" characters "chunkier".
And the guy's elbow is supposed to be very in, at his side. The pose is based off of what I do when I get in nervous situations, and my arm does this weird thing where my elbow juts into my side.
And about his right hand, I just put it in sort of just hanging there. But yeah, it looks like he's about to grab himself, my bad. >.< He's not though, don't worry. =P

Becca Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:17 PM
x]I love the chubbyness.

Animefreak Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:20 PM
*agrees with Becca about Archiving*

...Wolf pretty much summed up my comment... |D
You'd better get in. >:O

RazzleDazzleRara Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:33 PM
this should be archived.

Kia Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:43 PM
I understand what you're saying, and you're not saying it rudely so don't worry! I see it better now, what you were trying to do.

Pencil Hands Sunday, August 20th 2006, 8:56 PM
*wipes forehead* Feuw. I'm glad you understand. ^_^ *glomp*

Pocky Sunday, August 20th 2006, 9:35 PM
I wanna say archive too, but the anatomy is off. That shading is so beautiful though ;o; <3
And forgive me if this was already pointed out, but I think the locker number "129" should be more slanted, like the lockers.. cus right now, it looks like it's just floating. xD;

Pencil Hands Tuesday, August 22nd 2006, 1:40 AM
Really? I love you all SOOOO much!!! Thank you!! *feels super uber wonderfully happy* ^_^
Thank you again! And I'll try not to make anatomy errors on other pictures later on. =) *glomps of luff for all admins and everyone who commented and critiqued*

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