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[167193] Artist: Pauerkraut | Title: Tryout #1 | Time: 1h 34m
Pic #90712

Chibi Paint

Pauerkraut Saturday, April 21st 2012, 3:02 AM
Hiii. I need more than one place to draw so.. hello. I know this place used to be known for ~actually giving critiques~ but it's so quiet here and everywhere in the oekakiverse nowadays... Oh well.
This is Michiko from Michiko to Hatchin... tryout 1.

ZacharyB Saturday, April 21st 2012, 8:11 AM
Nice work, and the background contains some depth with the foreshortened cracks. ...If anything, I think you could add more trash against the wall! Then the flowers would be pushing up against something, providing a conceptual contrast. Although it does depend on what kind of message you want to convey.

Pauerkraut Sunday, April 22nd 2012, 3:10 AM
Oh yeah, I know what you mean. Thanks for the comment :>

Zero~ Thursday, April 26th 2012, 5:11 AM
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yeah it's pretty dead here. i'm not sure about other oekakis cause i don't venture far haha. i really like her legggsssssss (:

Prince Abooboo Thursday, April 26th 2012, 10:01 PM
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I'm really diggin' the color choice! One thing I would work on is consistently tapering. There are parts that look kind of sloppy, but then other places it looks like you went all out on making stuff look refined and neat. For instance on the shorts it looks like you just made quick lines to mark folds, not paying attention to thickness (as well as on her extended leg), while on her stomach folds it looks like you spent time cleaning up the lines.

I see some slight anatomy issues. Because it looks like you were going for a longer body and legs it makes her arms too short? I think that's what the issue is, but I could be wrong.

Other than that I really love it! The composition is great!

Pez Friday, April 27th 2012, 2:09 AM
Good luck! I love the feet!


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