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[167672] Artist: Mariah. | Title: Tryout #1 | Time: 54m 9s
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Mariah. Wednesday, December 26th 2012, 3:03 AM
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I would absolutely love critiques please.

EDIT: Oh, shoot. Does this still count for a tryout even though it's not really full body? I didn't even think of that, darn!

Ailaik Wednesday, December 26th 2012, 11:21 PM
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Maybe it's my screen, but I hardly see anything.
A vast blackness with some dark green shades, that make me assume it's a lanternfish of some kind.
But yeah, that would be my critique.. Lighten it up a bit.

nas1234567890 Thursday, December 27th 2012, 8:51 AM
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i think its pretty cool, but i agree with ailaik. ive got good eyes so i recognized it as a lantern fish pretty quickly, but you should consider that not everyone can see that well. making it more distinct would help. it feels a bit empty too. i know the deep sea is but, it just feels like you could put more into it. something to give it more interest. ooh, you could put some prey in front of the lantern fish maybe, and perhaps have some things in the background very faintly lit
just a suggestion though, you dont have to do that

(Edited on December 29, 2012, 10:55 am)

nas1234567890 Thursday, December 27th 2012, 8:51 AM
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oh, i hope its ok for me to give critique like that, i know still havent re-tried out again...

Mariah. Saturday, December 29th 2012, 2:24 AM
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Oh, I am so sorry! I usually have my screen on its brightest setting! I'll work on that. And hmm, okay not as plain, I suppose that'd help, too. Thanks so much guys!


[166959] Artist: Mariah. | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 1h 48m
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Mariah. Saturday, March 24th 2012, 6:45 PM
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Well, it's worth a shot.
I would really love some crits please, and some advice on making the salamander look like it's not floating on the paper would be greatly appreciated as well!

lamb Tuesday, March 27th 2012, 3:59 AM
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is this finished?

Mariah. Tuesday, March 27th 2012, 4:49 PM
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Yea, it's a sketch of a hand "drawing" a real salamander. Ya know, like opposite of a real hand drawing a sketch of a salamander..?

ZacharyB Wednesday, March 28th 2012, 1:22 AM
Great concept! You get an 'in' from me.

Mariah. Thursday, April 12th 2012, 4:32 AM
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Oh, wow, thank you!

Mariah. Saturday, June 16th 2012, 3:06 AM
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Thank you so much :)


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