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[164078] Artist: Lysnat | Title: Tryout number 1! | Time: 4h 46m
Pic #87597

Chibi Paint

Lysnat Monday, January 3rd 2011, 10:08 PM
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My first tryout....
I feel it could've been better.

lamb Monday, January 3rd 2011, 10:59 PM
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oh man i really love your lines. so smooth and clean and so interestingly coloured!! this is really cuuute. good luck!

CombuskensFlame Wednesday, January 5th 2011, 8:49 AM
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if you feel you could have done better then scrap this and well.. do better?
I would critique but maybe just show us this "better" you speak of?

cheeto Wednesday, January 5th 2011, 9:13 AM
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i'm not gonna touch on the anatomy because i know nothing about drawing dogs, but to me this is just... really boring? the shading is so smooth it doesn't show any texture at all, and the dog's just sitting there in the middle of the canvas. obviously you know how to draw pretty decently, so challenge yourself a bit and draw something really exciting for your next tryout.
also, like CF said, if you aren't satisfied with a picture then please, scrap it and draw something else. there's no limit to how long you can spend on a tryout or how long you take between tryouts, so take the time to show us all you've got with your next picture. if you do that, i'm sure you'll get in!


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