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[165511] Artist: Capsize | Title: alligatah | Time: 32m 29s
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Capsize Monday, June 13th 2011, 4:56 AM

Arty Monday, June 13th 2011, 4:57 AM
one fine gator for sure

Vivoldi Monday, June 13th 2011, 5:01 AM
smiley Aaawww he's a chubbalub!

snubble Monday, June 13th 2011, 5:20 AM
waaah this is adorable

[165180] Artist: Capsize | Title: Tryout 3 | Time: 4h 44m
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Capsize Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:39 AM
3rd tryout. c:

FP Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:19 AM
Your backgrounds are a little lacking, but boy do I love your style. In!

oiseau Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:25 AM
this is neat concept, and your style is just wonderful.
I lovee the shading on that creature and how you did the splash from the waves.
good luck~ (:

KESS Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:26 AM

Worm Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:26 AM
Aww so cute, I love the depth of the sea monster and the ruckus of the water up front! However you'd see more waves in back, they get smaller and ( at least visually ) more numerous the farther out you go! Also, you'd see the white caps on more than just the foremost ones

I'd critique the boniness of her face but I think that's both your style and possibly the character so I'll just mention it rather than critique

I love your style loads, you make it look PERFECT and I could totally see your ladies in a fashion design commerical or something, that's what it reminds me of :) Your colors are simple but well-used in my opinion, and I definately like when you use colors as opposed to dodge and burn as seen here, it adds much more depth

I vote IN

Kelli Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:32 AM
In, you have such whimsical art <3

cheeto Friday, June 3rd 2011, 2:49 AM

fgsfdsdasdfffffff Friday, June 3rd 2011, 3:04 AM
head attachment is a bit strange and repetitive
they are all facing forward, you should try a profile and different views -- looking up, looking down, different perspectives to keep it fresh

mewstara Friday, June 3rd 2011, 3:11 AM

sweet Friday, June 3rd 2011, 3:29 AM
wahh this is amazing! i'm in love with your style *A* i can really see the improvement from your first tryout (:

buuut, her pose kinda looks uncomfortable and not relaxed(which she appears to be) she's pretty much lifting her legs, since there is no surface to rest her legs on. In your sketch you probably her feet rest on the snake, but yeah :P

edit: oh yeah in please (:

(Edited on June 3, 2011, 3:29 am)

imbreum Friday, June 3rd 2011, 4:32 AM
I love this lots! And just the way you draw people in general, really. My crit is that the way her feet are sticking up looks kind of strange considering it doesn't look like they're resting on any surface. Maybe if her feet were pointed downward a little bit, while still keeping their pigeon-toedness. I vote in! Good luck!

Andee Friday, June 3rd 2011, 6:17 AM

~MagicalPyroDragon~ Friday, June 3rd 2011, 1:04 PM
In for sure!

indentations Friday, June 3rd 2011, 7:46 PM
this is adorable <3 in

Zero~ Sunday, June 5th 2011, 1:20 AM
in. your style is qtt

[165167] Artist: Capsize | Title: tryout 2 | Time: 1h 8m
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Capsize Sunday, May 15th 2011, 1:25 AM
Second tryout. c:

imbreum Sunday, May 15th 2011, 7:14 AM
Third. I think your first was much stronger. I really enjoy your style, but I think if you do a next one that you should concentrate on values, really stretching the lights and darks, placing the center subject in an environment it can interact with that has a light source you can utilize. Good luck!

Worm Sunday, May 15th 2011, 5:21 PM
I vote third. Neither of your images have very convincing backrounds, one being a gradient and this one just a texture. In the third you should maybe focus a little more on the backround than the character, they I do so ADORE how you draw characters. It looks very watercolor-paint to me and awesome stylized anatomy.

Ailaik Monday, May 16th 2011, 2:31 PM
did you use dodge/burn for shading? if so, I'd recommend not to do that again, and if not, use different shades, instead of a darker/lighter version of the colour
I like your style though, it's sweet, innocent and sexy at the same time
also try looking for the gravitational point of your character, and set at least one foot underneath that... this girl seems to be about to fall over to her left (viewer's right)

that said, I vote third, because I also would love to see a more defined background

CatInYourCloset Monday, May 16th 2011, 5:10 PM
Third for all the above reasons. :3 I really like your style. Just spend a lotttttttt of time on the next one so we can see your art here forever. <33

[165029] Artist: Capsize | Title: Martini Night | Time: 2h 51m
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Capsize Friday, April 29th 2011, 2:00 AM
My first tryout. c:

sweet Saturday, April 30th 2011, 3:40 AM
THIS IS SOOOO CUTE i love it! aaa &it's full body so thanku

first thing is that HER left hand looks backwards.. u probably meant it for it to be right but since no fingers
are shown it looks backwards.

i also thought u could've been a lot cleaner.for example by her knees and some around the arms is kind of smudgey. it makes it the drawing look lazy and rushed. : try avoiding that for a lineless piece like this for a more crisp and clean look.

i'm not sure if you did, but it looks like u used burn&dodge! please don't!it gives a bad appearance, and it doesn't teach you how to pick your own colors for shading D:

the shading on her hair does not really define all the strands in it. the shape of it is lovely, tho.
see how the different shades define all the various strands and how they fall?sure it doesn't have to be THAT detailed, but it's a very good example.

also i don't think the little board would support her body. :

I REALLY love this & you have a great style, i look forward to your next tryout!!!! any questions just askk!

afalcone2 Sunday, May 1st 2011, 4:13 AM
this is really enjoyable why doesn't it have more comments

I like the use of burn and dodge here.. I'm really looking foward to your next tryout

Flozibe Sunday, May 1st 2011, 4:18 PM
This is super enjoyable!

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