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[165968] Artist: Aorta | Title: tryout1ok | Time: 7h 20m
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Aorta Monday, July 4th 2011, 8:25 PM
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Ok so retryout number one! c:

I feel I kind of coped out on the background on this, which wasn't entirely intentional. For my second tryout I'll be sure to include a full background. :c

aiko-sama Monday, July 4th 2011, 7:01 AM
This is beautiful
*A*

rhaz_crossbones Monday, July 4th 2011, 8:49 PM
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Hey there! Very nice tryout! Or retryout I guess XD I did a quicky redline:
http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a247/Zigatsii/Picture25.png

Mainly it was just the right arm, the shoulder and arm bent out a bit too far I think, and bent inward unnaturally. I mean my arm does that but thats because I broke my elbow aha, But usually arms only bend like that if you're really putting your body weight on something, but since she's just putting her arm out cutely I don't think it'd go like that.

And yeah I think her legs might be a bit too long? Though If she's like supermodely I guess her legs could be that long, but I think someone else could cover that. Though the harsh line in her leg looks a bit strange if you were trying to define a muscle that way.

Anyway though I like it! I think the colors are nice. She's got a super cut dress too, I'd like to own one like that aha. THe detail on the little house in the back is a good touch too.

~MagicalPyroDragon~ Monday, July 4th 2011, 9:03 PM
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I remember youuuuuu!

good luck with your tryouts! Love this @w@


[95100] Artist: Aorta | Title: I remember you | Time: 16h 12m
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Aorta Thursday, November 15th 2007, 11:34 PM
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Pink

Konekochan16 Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 3:21 PM
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WOW! This is pure WIN...FTW

I am loving that face to death....:D

Aorta Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 3:52 PM
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USELESS i am going to cry :cc butok

Aorta Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 4:05 PM
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no just because i can't watch house/heroes without doing anything else and i want to get going on this like. soon. D8 ok imma do it. :c

AND YES I DID WANT TO MAKE SOMETHING OF IT PUNK &gt;8[[

our Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 5:06 PM
Uhh, I tried to redline but I couldn't find anything to add! 8|;; Maybe just move the boobie on our left a touch closer to the hand, because it looks a little smaller than the other one, but other than that! Good boobie times.

Magicalpyrodragon Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 9:15 PM
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I absoltely ADORE this. Your knowlege of anatomy is fantastic! Can't wait to see it done! :3

ichabod Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 10:31 PM
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ROFL I love your name, and your Icon. haha How fitting.

You should seriously try for SROA &gt;:c

rhaz_crossbones Thursday, November 15th 2007, 11:35 PM
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UM SO LIKE YEAH THIS IS SERIOUSLY AWESOME *W* The only thing that stands out to me is the the hand on her chest? It kinda looks...I dunno flat/papery? does that make anysense? I dunno how to explain it lol XD;


anyway yeah I think this is quite archive worthy

Aorta Thursday, November 15th 2007, 11:48 PM
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i get what you mean. @n@ it's her finnnngers. ok lemme see if i can fix it because now that you have pointed it out it is going to haunt me &gt;8|

Propaganda Friday, November 16th 2007, 12:42 AM
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i seriously thought that i was the shiz back in 2005-2006 9sh
http://nightfaey.deviantart.com/art/Wooooo-42086639
XD

Karle Friday, November 16th 2007, 1:00 AM
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O-0 to me, this screams archive. Seriously.

but there's little TINY things that bother me. I'm a perfectionest myself, however. The main thing that bothers me are the facial proportions and feature placements. The cheek facing away from the veiwer seems a bit to thin to me. The nose seems to be turned awkwardly- but I'll admit. Noses are a pain in the arse kinda hard. v-v; I dont know how some artists do it.

o.o but this is gorgous. the emotion, the smoothness- beautiful job, darling. Simply stunning.

Get an admin over here to put this baby in the archives.


|D; I thought I was awesome when I started drawing realism....

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y286/Mirana2/lion-1.png

I think thats one of the oldest pictures I have on the internet.... &gt;&gt;;; I've deleted a lot of them because my computer doesn't like storage.

Kuba Friday, November 16th 2007, 1:16 AM
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http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs14/f/2007/054/4/e/O_MAI_GERD_by_Koo_ba.jpg

BAM
I thought I was SO AWESOME

ok now fr srs this is gorgeous ;-;
I lovelove the way you colored it!!

our Friday, November 16th 2007, 1:30 AM
Oh jeez, this turned out wonderfully! I'd have to agree with Karle about the cheek being a little too thin, but it's still fantastic! I really really love all the tiny details in the lace. &lt;3&lt;3

Dogmatic Friday, November 16th 2007, 1:46 AM
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*archive*

Aorta Friday, November 16th 2007, 9:10 AM
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arrrchive~? @-@ awesome gosh

even though i said i wasn't going to do anything more to it? i had to when they were pointed out. DDD8 the cheek thing is fixed i think butyeahyouguyswereright. :x thank you our and karle !

i love seeing people improve :D it is awesome

Roin Ki Saturday, November 17th 2007, 3:18 PM
you should try out for advanced oekaki

you are definatly above intermediate


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