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[165111] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: Title | Time: 4h 48m
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Aizle Syracuse Sunday, May 8th 2011, 4:25 AM

Flozibe Sunday, May 8th 2011, 3:40 PM
Awhawhawh his wittle wings ;-;

jirokou Monday, May 9th 2011, 1:06 AM
I like his tongue. >w> A lot.
And the little dot highlights on him.

Aizle Syracuse Wednesday, May 11th 2011, 2:27 AM
:'D Thanku! ~ smiley Heehee, his tongue was fun to draw. X3

[165093] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: Derp | Time: 3h 57m
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Aizle Syracuse Friday, May 6th 2011, 6:45 AM
Fffffff dat timer. O^O


amorelia Friday, May 6th 2011, 11:57 AM
This is gorgeous, I love the movement and emotion those simple shapes and colors are able to deliver &#9829;

drrr!! Friday, May 6th 2011, 1:24 PM
vincent valentine,
his hairs not red but still!

~MagicalPyroDragon~ Friday, May 6th 2011, 1:48 PM
love detail on the hair and the movement in this drawing! :o

Aizle Syracuse Saturday, May 7th 2011, 10:58 PM
:'D Aww, you guys are so nice... 'Danku. >w< smiley

@Drrr!!: Eh...who now? o.o *is curious*

[163126] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: c: | Time: 3h 36m
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Aizle Syracuse Saturday, April 23rd 2011, 10:24 PM
I just remembered I never did finish this picture... and I've always wanted to try drawing a Sneasel. smiley

It was originally intended to be a tryout, I think. That would explain May's comment down there. =w=

May Thursday, November 4th 2010, 12:42 AM
This looks lovely so far, but for future reference, you should always just safety-save your work instead of sending it in. ;]

amorelia Monday, April 25th 2011, 10:07 PM
I love it how dream-like and fairytale-ish this is <3 The red adds lovely contrast to all the white and grey :)

Good to see you posting, you should definitely draw here more often!

[164751] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: Tryout #3 | Time: 11h 45m
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Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 4:18 PM
Blah, the background leaves quite a bit to be desired... but then again Marcey's taking up the whole picture. smiley HOW DARE HE. Hopefully this makes up for the neglect of anatomy in my other tryouts. >w<

Timer lies again. Left it on all night and then some. smiley

EDIT: I don't know why, but the more I stare at that back foot, the more it bothers me. >=T

emi Thursday, March 31st 2011, 5:54 PM
in so much this is amazing

regrette Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:00 PM
oH my god the tiny arm is freakin me out

regrette Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:09 PM
i really really like your second tryout

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:09 PM
Baww, thankies so much, you guys ~ smiley

@Regrette: X'D Maybe I went a little overboard on the perspective... I try to fix it mebbe? O^O

regrette Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:15 PM
ahh you can't fix tryout after they've been posted but i can tell you could probably draw it fine anyway lol in!!

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:19 PM
Oh... o.O I didn't know that. Huh. Thanks for telling me ~ X'D And yay! Thank you again ~ smiley

SockRockets Thursday, March 31st 2011, 8:58 PM
his arms and legs are like
way too long
also the leg closest to us is twisted in a way that looks really uncomfortable. like his knee is pointed almost directly at us, but the lower leg and foot are facing completely to the right. his body is curved more than it should be in this pose, his pelvis should be curved under, it makes the pose look really unstable.
as for your comment about the back foot, it's probably bothering you because the foot is facing us but the leg is facing outward

i say out

issi_007 Thursday, March 31st 2011, 9:07 PM

The shading on the face and hair looks great, but the shading on the belly makes the belly look divided in half. Belly fat usually doesn't split vertically like that. The shading on the fabric seems sloppy because the shading is too light and the fabric isn't very defined. Don't be afraid to use darker colours for shading, like you've done with the hair and face, and go more dramatic.

The red you've added in the foreground takes a lot of the depth away from the image, as I can't tell where the red is coming from.

And one tip to you: the light source is yellow. The shading, naturally, would be a shade of purple, as it's the complementary colour of yellow. In this picture, you've only added blue, which is one of the reasons this image lacks some depth.

Another tip to you: the red you've added, I'm assuming it's the light from another light source. You've only visibly highlighted the pants and forgotten about the rest of your foreground. And since it's a light source, you need to shade on the opposite parts, even though there's already the yellow light shining on them. And red light source = green shadows.

The sunset sky looks flat and holds little depth. One way to fix this is to shade the clouds; another way is to give the sky a gradient. It goes from light down to dark on top, even if there are clouds in the sky, even if there is a sunset. Make sure to capture this, it can give life to almost any sky.

The perspective looks a bit distorted, as you pointed out yourself. The arm looks TINY and very very long, though I think it's because you've only put the arm into perspective, and not the sleeve. Sleeves, however poofy or big, support themselves on arms, and therefore should follow the same perspective as the arms.
That didn't really make sense, sorry. I hope you get it though ahaha :'D

and and and I just want to say you have improved LOADS since your last tryout session in September.

Good luck <3

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 9:10 PM
='D Ah, thank you very much for all that; I love getting long crits, they're quite helpful. ^w^ I shall keep all this in mind ~ smiley Very much appreciated! ^.^

Minxy Thursday, March 31st 2011, 9:23 PM
good tryout

Ailaik Thursday, March 31st 2011, 10:09 PM
there's so much wrong with this picture, yet I can't say "out"
I really love the colors and would like to see you grow here

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 10:44 PM
>w< I agree, the more I look at it the more I find myself going smiley
But I'm extremely grateful that you're still willing to give me a chance to improve. ='D Thank you ~ smiley


FP Thursday, March 31st 2011, 11:07 PM
Ok well, yes this has a lot of flaws, but this set of tryouts is a huge improvement over your last set, which shows that you are improving.

So, I say in, cuz you've obviously been making progress, and your painting/colouring technique is there.

cheeto Thursday, March 31st 2011, 11:34 PM
you're very skilled at creating images that look good overall, but i really don't see from this and your other two tryouts that you understand anatomy very well. you've improved a lot from your last set of tryouts, so i think if you work for just another couple months to focus on anatomy it'll do you a lot of good. for now, though, i'm going to have to say out.

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 11:44 PM
@SockRockets: Oh! I see what you mean... I didn't really notice those things before. o.o Good points. ^ ^; Thank you!

@FP: >///< Ah, thank you very much ~ smiley

@Cheeto: Hmm... I think where I went wrong was in attempting something new in this last tryout, namely that weird pose. I probably would've been better off just drawing something I already knew to accurately demonstrate the level I'm at anatomy-wise. >w< Oh well, silly me ~ smiley Thank you for the input! ^.^

Aizle Syracuse Friday, April 1st 2011, 12:09 AM
OwO Just a quick question to anyone out there... when would be the appropriate time to decide wether I'm in or out? o.O

SockRockets Friday, April 1st 2011, 12:14 AM
it used to be when your picture was bumped off the front page but now that it's dead here i'd just wait about 24 hrs since you submitted your final tryout (this one)

Aizle Syracuse Friday, April 1st 2011, 12:16 AM
^.^ Ah, I see. Thanks, SockRockets!

fgsfdsdasdfffffff Friday, April 1st 2011, 3:54 AM

starfruit Friday, April 1st 2011, 5:12 AM
When did this turn into the advanced board? I remember when this place started out and I was an Admin (EeMo) and our tryout rules were not so harsh... I can't vote because I myself am not accepted yet (due to inactivity) but what happened to people having a style? I think that this drawing is really well thought out, I mean Tim Burton's characters are all out of proportion, and people love him... I think people are too serious about anatomy here... There is obvious talent in this drawing ^_^ It may not be perfect... but I remember when this board was for people to connect, and have a passion for art... I'm sad to know it's not so relaxed here any more :( IF my vote counted it would definitely be in favor of this drawing :)

Asthenia Friday, April 1st 2011, 5:23 AM
Did you use a ref?

Just wondering c:

Aizle Syracuse Friday, April 1st 2011, 5:32 AM
@Starfruit: >///< ...Even if it was not addressed in my general direction, what you've said really means a lot to me. smiley Thank you so much ~ smiley

Asthenia: Naw. I probably should have though. <X3

cheeto Friday, April 1st 2011, 5:35 AM
starfruit, the standards of the board rise naturally along with the skill level of the artists who regularly frequent it.

as for stylization, it's fine as long as it's obviously deliberate. if someone with a more whimsical style, such as your example tim burton, came here and tried out, we wouldn't apply standard rules of anatomy as harshly. but to me, this picture reads as if the artist tried to have proper anatomy and didn't quite have a good enough grasp on it to make it look convincing.

no one here is saying that this artist isn't talented; she very obviously is. however, based on her three tryouts, i personally don't feel like she has enough knowledge of the way a body is put together to adhere to the standards of this board.

Ailaik Friday, April 1st 2011, 10:55 AM
"the standards of the board rise naturally along with the skill level of the artists who regularly frequent it"
not much of a standard left then, is there? since the number of people visiting is like 20% of what it used to be
I think her art fits the board just fine for what it is now...

emi Friday, April 1st 2011, 11:11 AM
i personally think she's more talented than half the people who've commented. and certainly more talented than many of the members here in general. i bet if everyone tryed out again then there would be very few accepted.

itsbecca! Friday, April 1st 2011, 4:06 PM
i really like this, even if the anatomy is a bit funky, but your other two tryouts aren't really up to par. had you have done more like this my vote might have been different, but it's gonna have to be out for now.

fgsfdsdasdfffffff Friday, April 1st 2011, 5:43 PM
emi the white knight of aizle because she draws long hair anime bishies

Owl Friday, April 1st 2011, 7:05 PM

amorelia Friday, April 1st 2011, 7:34 PM
In, since I adore the way you used color in all three of these and your knowledge of using oekaki tools is definitely showing. Personally I can ignore the anatomy and perspective flaws stated above in the other comments because this picture is well-put together otherwise. To me this looks funky and whimsical, it's interesting and fun to look at with the over the top stylizing and dramatic, red color scheme. In my standards I place the atmosphere above perfect anatomy as to me art and design are more about delivering moments and feelings to the viewer. And all your three tryouts do it well enough to make up for the little flaws. I know my view is quite different from this oekaki's standards but I think you are advanced enough to be accepted.

So yes, in.

Lynn Friday, April 1st 2011, 9:56 PM
why cant this place just be active all the time instead of being creepers who wait until drama to come out of lurking?

This chick is obvs at least intermediate. Im not gonna kiss her feet or anything, but I like the pic.

SockRockets Friday, April 1st 2011, 10:07 PM
whoa sro take a chill pill SiT dOwN u GuYs
arguing on a tryout is not the way to make the artist feel welcomed

Minxy Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 1:29 AM
lol owow, this is srs bsn

Fuuinrei Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 2:45 AM
Was this drama train sleeping or what when I tried out?

I like her pictures so far. Specially the second tryout.

I say in.

rhaz_crossbones Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 3:37 AM

kremmel Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 4:06 AM
IN, i agree that the standards of this oekaki have gone way down. i mean you're clearly not a beginner, and you're even more clearly improving. maybe this oekaki would be more active if ya'll could pull dem panties out your asscracks. scrolling through this page this image does not even stand out to me, since it is comparable or exceeding in quality to all the images on this page. it's pretty freakin' clear that she's intermediate, c'mon now

turtle. Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 4:30 AM
In, please. :>

a kim Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 6:07 AM
sigh did a shit storm really start because two people voted out and someone who isnt a member anymore made a big post about how the board is so HiGH StaNdards and UnfAiR even though the majority of votes were in
havent we had this conversation and argument 20 x before
what comes out of it??

so stop

kremmel Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 2:51 PM
the sociology of an oekaki, humans will be humans forever.

Aizle Syracuse Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 3:35 PM
O.O Wow.... Thank you everyone for all your input; I will do my best to practice the things you guys mentioned and I'm very grateful for the tips. D': I didn't mean to cause a problem though... I'm sorry. ;.;

Tydreih Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 5:32 PM
Aizle it's totally not your fault, don't feel bad, you can't help the way people react ^^

I love your art, especially the atmosphere in it (but I can't vote yet since I'm still doing my tryouts) :)

cheeto Saturday, April 2nd 2011, 5:47 PM
oh, there's no reason to apologize! i promise you didn't do anything wrong, so don't worry about it, okay?
anyway you're obviously in by a landslide here, so welcome! i hope we haven't scared you so much that you never come back, haha.

[164746] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: Tryout #2 | Time: 12h 34m
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Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 3:04 AM
Okay, first, timer lies horribly. smiley I left this on all day... and came back at random times to work on it. smiley I suppose the light source may be a bit difficult to pinpoint... but at least my shadows are somewhat consistent. :D

cheeto Thursday, March 31st 2011, 3:50 AM
i really, really like the colors used here, as well as the whole mood of the piece. every part of the environment is done quite nicely. however, the character's proportions are very strange, and that doesn't really show us you know what you're doing anatomy-wise. you had this same problem in your first tryout, so i'd like to see a third tryout from you focusing on showing us that you understand proper anatomy.

Minxy Thursday, March 31st 2011, 3:59 AM
I agree with Cheeto, I would like to see a 3rd tryout showing a little anatomy.

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 4:03 AM
>w< Ah, thank you very much for the advice ~ Yes I will do that. ^w^;

KESS Thursday, March 31st 2011, 7:31 AM
<3 luv this

emi Thursday, March 31st 2011, 9:18 AM
in defo

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 5:55 PM
smiley Aww, 'danki so much, you guys ~ smiley

[164729] Artist: Aizle Syracuse | Title: Tryout #1 | Time: 3h 38m
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Aizle Syracuse Monday, March 28th 2011, 10:36 PM
Bah, every time I attempt this, something comes up and I always have to start over. @_@ Sorry guys... I'm relatively certain nothing else'll explode in my face for the time being. ^ ^;

ANYWAY... This took too long, my eyes are bleeding, I'm going to bed. XD Good night.

All characters are belong to me ~ <3

cheeto Tuesday, March 29th 2011, 7:37 AM
i have no idea what's going on in this picture but it looks cool

tshefeua Tuesday, March 29th 2011, 5:33 PM
I love that tail 8) it's just so kawaii x3 and that gold face!!!
it's so lovely

SockRockets Tuesday, March 29th 2011, 5:52 PM
the anatomy of the little animal looks really off..like it has a huge head and long neck but a tiny body. and the characters stand out A LOT because they're so bright in such a dark place
the background is really cool and nicely stylized, it looks really spooky!!
good luck on your next tryout

Aizle Syracuse Wednesday, March 30th 2011, 1:13 AM
^.^ Thank you everyone ~ <3 Sorry if it's a bit confusing... I 'll do better this next time! O^O

SockRockets: Yep, it's supposed to be that way. ^ ^; Heehee... I tried to make it look the same as it does on his reference sheet:


And thank you! =D

SockRockets Thursday, March 31st 2011, 2:46 AM
the point of a tryout is to show that you know decent anatomy of what you plan to draw here once you're accepted.....

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 3:19 AM
Yes ~ And this is how I draw. X'3 But can't you tell I did it that way on purpose? After all, as a certain person once told me, you can't properly break the rules unless you already know them. Stylization is more fun anyway ~ <3

SockRockets Thursday, March 31st 2011, 3:35 AM
don't need anatomy it's my style

Aizle Syracuse Thursday, March 31st 2011, 4:06 AM

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