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OH BOY SECOND TRYOUTTTTT. I have no clue if the timer is right because my internet died twice while I was working on this. I really hope this is good enough. Lots of fun with steampunk and rust. Inspired by the art in Jing: King of Bandits. Tryout #1: http://sroekaki.net/oekaki/pictures/66521.jpg So? In? Out? Third? Why or why not? (Edit: Whoops! Saw a few mistakes and wanted to fix them real fast before any comments popped up.) |
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Third. Your anatomy skills are good but your backrounds are really lacking. They're too blurred to the point where I feel like I'm looking at one picture slapped on top of another. |
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ahhh you're so close it's like sdghjskdghj but i have to say third also. to add on to what mei said, i recommend trying smoother lines, and also line-arting the background. i know it takes longer, but it does help unify a picture, and improve the overall quality. and you can do some funky, detailed stuff with lineart! also, try to vary the thickness a bit more. i like what you have, but you can take it even further. try tapering the lines more, or try making them thinner in the side that the light source is, and vice versa on the side with shadows. as for anatomy, you've got some issues here and there. nothing severe, but the longer i look, the more one thing bugs me. his front arm is out of proportion with the rest of his body. from shoulder to elbow should be as long as from shoulder to waist, and you have it as being almost as low as his butt, which is... awkward, especially in relation to how long the other arm (which is quite short) is. |
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tablet's acting up arrrrrrgh and i cant scroll down WHAT this website always malfunctions on my computer i forgot why i never go on sadfgfdsgff (Edited on July 3, 2009, 2:03 am) |
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holocaust
Corina
MadSeason
I love these! Definitely very pin-up :D
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phew, okay. thanks. hehe, this wasnt really worth saving, but i guess...im gonna do something with it...? the legs and arms are really fudged up. (Uploaded by Kodisku) |
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duuude that hair is amazing fff i love her ---- too omg and the way you draw eyes is so mysteriousss ART IS ALWAYS WORTH SAVING pff ! |
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Oh god, IDK why I'm trying out for such an advanced board, but I seriously need to prove something to myself. It probably also wasn't a good idea to experiment with dual light sources on a tryout...meh. He's illuminated by a streetlamp that's out of the frame on the left. I know this technically isn't a full body, I promise I'll make up for the lack of feet in the next one... Even if I'm not at the appropriate level for this board, crits are appreciated... |
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its cool, i like that you're experimenting i'll do a paint-over with shading/lighting critique |
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***Disclaimer: Not accepted*** Okay, that's over with...anyway, I can't crit, but it looks pretty cool and I think being a little experimental in tryouts is good. ^^ Much better than "I'm going to draw a field of grass and stuff something in the middle". On the other hand, you still want to do what you can pull off...*shrugs* It's a fine balance. Good luck! ^^ |
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also, the background reminds me of a certain painting...hehehe, is funny to me |
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http://i43.tinypic.com/2lwnamw.jpg i made it greyscale so you could better see the values. I might've gone too dark, ah! Anyway, you shouldn't use yellow as a highlight in a situation like this, unless all the other colors were affected by the yellow too...blahblahblahh |
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Thanks for doin that for me. <3 I hate that "SOMETHINGLOOKSWRONGBUTWHATISITIDON'TKNOW" feeling. THANKS GUYS. (I'll start #2 soon.) |
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YOKOYOKOYOKO.
Hrm. What I suggest is to do something that relaxes you. I know that everybody else has said the same thing, but that just goes to show that it works! Take a warm bath in a dark room, and stay away from anything with a screen. YOKOYOKOYOKOYOKO
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Yeah Hun, I have to agree with Mei. You certainly show a lot of promise, but for now, just try getting a hold of the Oekaki tools via the link that she gave.
Good luck, and please continue to draw! Don't be discouraged.
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so i wanted t jut draw anything and i am talking to somone on the phone and we both really love froslass so..i drew a froslass |
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I LOVE FROSLASS AAAAAAA Idk why but her face is frightening me I STILL LOVE THIS BRO |
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hi 0ni ilu say hi for me k |
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she's got my hair (but slightly curlier slkfj)!ahahaha this is so pretty. |
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I wish I had big curly hair. D: This is beautiful~ <3 |
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You draw such awesome curly hair. D: I wish I could do that jkdbdfjrhg |

anatomy/touch pad/perspective practicery.
total. faill!
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